you 3d stuff have no stick with you bg.. i think add in a horizontal line to make it look more perspective view... i think will look more nice gambateh^^
the enter button too big..ppl duno wanna focus on the enter or ur creation.. the text alignment have to improve...overall feel ok.. since ur 1st layout have fauna vector...suppose add some into 2nd layout make it more related between page... 2nd page too blank...and the border shadow too dark..
hmmm...overall feel not bad..give me the feel quite comfortable ^^ may be is the green color...
ReplyDeletehmmm...i wonder the color thing in the second page is?? button?
i think is button oso...
ReplyDeletehao jeong geng...
but 2nd page can be more interesting...
like ur 1st page very much
you 3d stuff have no stick with you bg.. i think add in a horizontal line to make it look more perspective view...
ReplyDeletei think will look more nice
gambateh^^
how jeong...ur layout make me blur again>.<
ReplyDeleteur topic is talking about platic recycle right?
then how come the 3D object there is a PAPER bottle one??
Thx for the comment, haha... Ya, i m gonna change the paper bottle, just felt like so cacat. I try to change abit more.
ReplyDeletethe enter button too big..ppl duno wanna focus on the enter or ur creation..
ReplyDeletethe text alignment have to improve...overall feel ok..
since ur 1st layout have fauna vector...suppose add some into 2nd layout make it more related between page...
2nd page too blank...and the border shadow too dark..
thanks to all comment. Direction is clear. I believe HJ know what to do now. Keep it up.. U have improve a lot. Surprise me again, ok?
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